SPOILERS HERE — if you haven’t read DIM DISTANT STARS (and intend
to), you might not want to read this post!
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A confession: when I
began writing Dim Distant Stars, I had no idea which of his many
female friends Jack McFee might end up with. Nor did I intend him to
have made any decisions by the end. Vili — Princess Vilma Lempsen —
remained the strongest contender. I did know Policewoman Veronika
‘Niki’ O’Toole would be taken out of the running.
The first thought
there was that she would fall for Jack’s college friend, Father
John Barbosa, and join him as a colonist. That felt clunky by the
time I reached that point in the story. It would have added
irrelevant narrative. So I simply said she had already emigrated,
creating a sort of foreshadowing, and decided Anna Gallen would be
the one to marry John and go off to a ‘new world.’ This way of
removing her from contention seemed good until I was almost to the
end of the book.
When a radical shift
of direction presented itself — and I went with it. John is
killed*, Jack proposes to Anna, she accepts. All tied up, no more
doubt and indecision from our hero. About time! I’d always truly
wanted the two to end up together but I just couldn’t see a clear
route to it. This presented the perfect one.
He would never have
been quite right for Vili anyway, would he? Jack would have been
restless. Anna is the one woman with whom he can truly share his
life.
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*A shocker for many
readers, I’m sure. It even shocked me that I could treat such a
sympathetic character so badly.